I loved both chapters! The first chapter was nice becuase I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru "gets back" at Kagome and would like to see more of their future lives. As for the second, I absolutely love that you were able to capture that moment in the morning with the kids in such a nice way. It was sweet, almost like you were invited in to see a morning with the family. I can't wait to see what else you have for this challenge/story!
SHIPRIN ALL THE WAY!!!!
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