This was beautifully written and very sad. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
I am so glad that Kagome has gotten over Inuyasha and I love how you have done it. Now on with the developing romance between my favored pairing S/K.
What more can I say except your story is a joy to read. If your are not a novelist, then you should be; your writing style is just that good. Hmm, leaving us with an interesting cliffy. Now I cannot wait for the next chapter. I wonder who it can be?
Looking forward to the next chapter, coming soon I hope. (smiling gleefully).
(Chapter 8) - Tue 21 Feb 2017
Una storia davvero interessante, però mi piacerebbe che aggiornarsi più spesso.
Shadows knocking on walls? Itsa ghost! LOL.
Great chapter, its nice to see some progress with her mental health. (:
(Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Feb 2017
So, I never review, but I'll make an exception. I really enjoy your writing style, descriptive without drowning in adjectives, and so far the pacing is pleasing. I'm holding out hope for a wonderfully slow burn. Glad you're writing agan :>
This is such a wonderful story! I can't wait to see how it progresses! ^.^
(Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jan 2017
Wonderful story, you are a talented writer! I love your characters, are any of the others going to make an appearance? Can't wait for the next chapter!
(Chapter 7) - Mon 16 Jan 2017
I really enjoyed this chap , idk i connected with them as i read i know it sounds weird but i did lol anywho great chap
Eryn (Chapter 7) - Mon 09 Jan 2017
Their relationship is beautiful in it's complexity.
Thanks for the well wishes, I hope your year has started off well! This was a wonderful and engaging chapter, very emotional and interestingwhat with the minld culture shock and thier mutual learning. Not to mention thier final goodbye of the chapter and Sess's common sense you dont have to fight talk. Great work!
I had read this story when it started out as a one shot. I am glad you made into a chapter tale. It is a exquisite piece of writing. I love how you bring out the interactions between Sessho and Kagome. It is like reading a detailed account of a blossoming romantic love story between two polar opposites blending into a yin and yang to balance their love and friendship. I enjoyed reading this story and I look forward to future chapters. Excellent work.
A really wonderful chapter! I especially love the confusion of cultures, and Kagome's need for consent. Also, thanks for writing on my wall in greeting, and please continue the wonderful work!
Violetlune (Chapter 7) - Fri 06 Jan 2017
I am enjoying the story so far. Great dynamic between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Cannot wait to read more!
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