woah cliffhanger

Love your story so far  can't wait to see happens next. 

don't give up! you're doing great, mama! yunno what they say (well, i dunno who, but i did say one time that my friend mentioned someone who did ^^;): keep writing! don't worry about the quality now. focus on that later. there will always come a time when you can come back when yer fresh and improve the quality of the chapter. yer actually inspiring me to do my own chapters whenever i see you do yers. i have yet to share my story, but i do plan to. so look out fer it, haha! i coulda told you this in our chat, but i preferred to do it in a review! you need a few permanent reminders of why you write. you do so fer yerself, but just remember the fans who love and support you and yer writing. <3

Wonderful update! Thanks so much. I cannot wait to see what power this is that can drain Sesshomaru. Kagome is coming into her power. I can’t wait to see what she has done with it. I hope that all goes well for you and your family. Blessings. 

I am sorry about your situation.Take one day at a time because things will get better and better.  This chapter is so amazing. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Very intense chapter. Wow! That's going to make Inu crazy! 

This chapter was a wonderful break from all the bad things. I love Kagome moment of peace and a sneak peak at a new ability to slow time around her. Looking forward to seeing where that goes. A perhaps a slow realization of growing feelings between her and Sessh. 

Wow! That was one huge chapter and action packed! Great update! 

That was gut wrenching! So very sad. They had better figure it out soon or he'll suck the life out of everyone. Very nicely done. Thanks. 

Absolutely adoring this story! Dying to see what happens next, and although I have serious suspicions about Kiyoshi, why cant anyone just give Kags a straight answer on who she should be wary of?? Men..... Also I just wanted to point out that Sango's neko-youkai is named Kirara (Japanese version) or Kilala (English version), rather than Kiara :) Keep up the awesome work, you're an amazing storyteller!

I feel like Kiyoshi is in league with this Shadow. Just seems strange that the being with the Monks was not there and yet, where is Kiyoshi? Sesshoumaru is acting off too, but, I believe he's not got exactly what he needs to kill the creature or the one with "great" power to destory Youkai. Well, I am hooked on the fic.  Can't wait for the next update.

Wonderful chapter! That shadow is snarky and sure of himself. Sigh, why can't Sessh just give her a straight answer? So many suppositions going through my head. Cheers and Thanks!

LOL...Short?? Your chapters are amazingly long...all of them! Hmm, is that really Sessh? Wow! Great story!

Love this story!! I can't wait till your next update. Do you plan on Inuyasha and the new inuyokai female getting together? I hope so! 

Great chapter! There are too many questions with few straight answers. Still not trusting Kiyoshi or his motives yet. Thanks so much. 

Sigh...that boy will never learn, but these encounters do provide satisfying entertainment. 

Wonderful chapter. Not sure I totally trust Kiyoshi yet, but that will play out as we go along. Looking forward to the next chapter. These are really nice long chapters. You are spoiling me. 

Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

This is a wonderful story. You have really laid it out very thoughtfully. I love how it is progressing. 

Whew! A nice visit with Sango and some interesting revelations. Close call for the girls. Sessh to the rescue. Nice chapter.