Thanks so much for reviewing "Detrimental Desires!" I wrote that quite a while back so it's great to still get reviews on it. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Thanks for reading and reviewing Life Lessons. Aah! I agree with you on the issues of grammar, tenses and switching scenes. It is the first story that I wrote and to be still getting feedback from it is great. One day I will definitely take some time to fix the errors. I can't right now because I am busy with another story.