Thanks for the review on MBSL. As you said they didn't talk much, but when you really think about it there isn't much to talk about considering they had only been together for a month. At this point Kagome needs to accept or reject Sesshomaru. His motives were less than honorable and she feels wronged but she has a child to think about and if she wants him a fight on her hands from his wife. Next chapter will move be more conclusive where their feelings are concerned.
Created On: 10/02/2016 22:08:15 Edited By WickedSecrets On: 10/02/2016 22:13:50
Thank you for your review of Letters Home
In regard to your question: This fic is a frame story, told mostly in flashbacks. The letters Rin receives set the theme for the following chapters as Sesshomaru reflects on Kagome's employment. It's also a time to get a look at what is going on with Rin and Sesshomaru while Kagome is on her extended vacation.(I plan to give more detailed accounts of their daily lives in future chapters)
I know I went about it weird since it's mostly told from Kagome's perspective and not Sesshomaru's (since he's the one remembering), but if you'don't like to stick around until the end you'll understand why.
So yes it is in fact a story withint a story, the first I've ever written. I apologize for confusing you, but I truly hope you're enjoying it none the less.
Thank you so much for your review of Unmei Ni Koubi. I am glad you are enjoying the story. Regarding Kagome, she is still young and inexperienced and has lived her whole life sheltered and protected. Now she is being asked to dedicate her life to atotal stranger who is a demon. She is in shock and it has only been a day since the revelation, so she will need some more time. Sesshomaru on the other hand also has his reservations about the pairing. However, his motives are driven by life or death. So he really has no choice in it...I mean he could be stubborn and retaliate against the gods but he is mature and knows better. Hope this helps! The little songbird will come around, she just needs a little Sessho convincing
Thank you so much for your review! I have actually never written this before. So it's not going under any revision. chapter 7 probably feels newer because I have been working on my dialogue. And I have been adjusting my writing and getting out the kinks.
Basically it was her scent of what she was doing that had them throwing out their instincts. they knew they got her all frustrated and they decided to help her out and thus got to have fun. Don't worry the next chapter will clear things up. Plus Mama hasn't given up her claim yet.
Hii, thank you for your review on The Otome Game. I agree than Sesshoumaru is in more emotional danger than Kagome is but I thought it was somewhat clear that Kagome has been falling for Sesshoumaru throughout the game. She just hasn't realized it or focused on it yet because so much else is happening around her. She brushes off any feelings she has for him by looking at The Love meter instead, because shes both a little unsure about love atm and she has to focus on the game. Her reactions to him when she forgets her guilt i.e blushing, rambling, enjoying his company, they're all real reactions to him that show her feelings towards him without being addressed. But don't worry they will be and she'll have a talk with herself about her behavior and confronting her feelings