Avi
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Created On: 03/21/2019 10:44:10 Edited By Avi On: 03/21/2019 10:44:38
Thank you for reviewing A Walk in the Park! Heartbreak isn't something easy to overcome, at all, and can stay with a person for a very long time. Everyone deals with it differently, however. I mentioned in a previous chapter that I'm loosely basing the story on a personal experience. Kagome is forgiving, but the heartache won't leave easily. You'll find out how she attempts to deal with it in a future chapter.
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Midnight Song
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Created On: 03/01/2019 05:15:18
Thanks for your review on A Child Lost. It was...interesting. I don't think I've every had a reviewer tell me something was a mistake ahah. I am sorry you feel that way though, and I hope you decide to stick with the story and trust that I know what I'm doing. I promise you, all of your worries are unfounded. As far as the three souls thing, if I can suggest re-reading chapter 74, Token? That chapter explains exactly about the three souls--and I can't say more than that without giving away main plot points of the story.
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Dunkelgelb
Iowa
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Created On: 02/15/2018 22:09:43
Thank you very much for your comment on "The Shoot." I'm sorry for not thanking you earlier; you left your review back in October '17 and it's February 2018 now. Regarding your comment, the story will end up being a threesome relationship between Kagome, Sango, and Sesshomaru, possibly a foursome with those three and Kikyo. I approached WiccanMethuselah with the premise and after consulting with her fellow admins, she approved on the grounds that as long as Sesshomaru and Kagome end up together in some way, even in a threesome or more with other characters, it was permitted to be uploaded to Dokuga.
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Reira
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Created On: 04/29/2017 18:19:51
Thanks for the review! Oh Inuyasha has it coming, don't worry. Kagome has a nice long lecture and perhaps a few sits planned. She's more just frustrated with Sesshomaru right now because he's not being the better man by ignoring Inuyasha's taunts.
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Kagome Yuki Niwa
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Created On: 04/06/2017 09:38:22
Hi Reeeee~
Thank you for the review but I think this is the third time Inuyasha has shown up. He appeared for a day once when she was younger to hang out with her and Sesshoumaru took her memories of that time. The second was when Sesshoumaru asked Inuyasha when they would meet one another in the past. Thank you for reading!
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Jessica
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Created On: 03/05/2017 21:15:51 Edited By Jessica On: 03/05/2017 21:16:35
Thanks for reading and for the feed back it is much appreciated! And no there aren't two plots going on things are suppose to be vague and kind of unclear bc more shall be unveiled. But yes you are very correct on Kagome's feelings and what she feels her purpose is. But please keep reading once I update and thanks again
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Moonlight Silk
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Created On: 01/16/2017 21:13:56
Thanks for the review on MBSL. As you said they didn't talk much, but when you really think about it there isn't much to talk about considering they had only been together for a month. At this point Kagome needs to accept or reject Sesshomaru. His motives were less than honorable and she feels wronged but she has a child to think about and if she wants him a fight on her hands from his wife. Next chapter will move be more conclusive where their feelings are concerned.
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WickedSecrets
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Created On: 10/02/2016 22:08:15 Edited By WickedSecrets On: 10/02/2016 22:13:50
Thank you for your review of Letters Home
In regard to your question: This fic is a frame story, told mostly in flashbacks. The letters Rin receives set the theme for the following chapters as Sesshomaru reflects on Kagome's employment. It's also a time to get a look at what is going on with Rin and Sesshomaru while Kagome is on her extended vacation.(I plan to give more detailed accounts of their daily lives in future chapters)
I know I went about it weird since it's mostly told from Kagome's perspective and not Sesshomaru's (since he's the one remembering), but if you'don't like to stick around until the end you'll understand why.
So yes it is in fact a story withint a story, the first I've ever written. I apologize for confusing you, but I truly hope you're enjoying it none the less.
--Wicked
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Sessakag
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Created On: 08/25/2016 18:23:24
Thank you for your lovely review! There's a new chapter out today, hope you enjoy that one as well!
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vhfluffy
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Created On: 03/29/2016 11:25:00
Thank you so much for your review of Unmei Ni Koubi. I am glad you are enjoying the story. Regarding Kagome, she is still young and inexperienced and has lived her whole life sheltered and protected. Now she is being asked to dedicate her life to atotal stranger who is a demon. She is in shock and it has only been a day since the revelation, so she will need some more time. Sesshomaru on the other hand also has his reservations about the pairing. However, his motives are driven by life or death. So he really has no choice in it...I mean he could be stubborn and retaliate against the gods but he is mature and knows better. Hope this helps! The little songbird will come around, she just needs a little Sessho convincing
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