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Elizabeth

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I have become an avid fanfic reader.  Give me lemons!

 

The following is a bit of inspired drabble showing common mistakes I find in people's works.  It is inspired from many sources, so it's not a shot at any one particular person.  It has been expanded on, and modified, and added to.  Each is an example of spelling mistakes I see, or possible bad grammar.  I also see commas either used to much, or not enough, but that is hard to show correctly.  I just want to fix it all, and if you will let me, I will.

I don't have much experience at beta-ing, and 'affect' and 'effect' still confuse me from time to time, but I know the difference between 'there,' 'their,' and 'they're,' while 'two,' 'to,' and 'too' are not interchangeable.

I know when to 'wander' with my feet and when to 'wonder' with my mind.

I use my 'manners' at 'manors' and everywhere else.

'Hallowed' places are not 'hollowed' places.

A 'site' is a location while a 'sight' is a view.

I 'passed' a car in the 'past' while smelling a 'scent' 'sent' to me by the wind.

My 'sense' is good 'since' it has been well trained by classes.

I 'accept' and 'except' depending on the situation.

I 'assess' good 'asses'  when I have 'access' to the mall.

'Were' I to go 'where' you want you'd better 'wear' clothes.

I may be 'plain' while standing on a 'plane' but the 'plains' are huge compared to an air'plane.'

'Your' is possessive while 'you're' is contraction.

'Waist' is your middle, while 'waste' is trash.

Will you 'quit' being so 'quiet' 'quite' soon?

I take my 'cue' from the director to join the long 'queue.'

You 'bear' a burden, and 'bare' your naked body.  So you'd 'bear' a baby, but would want to avoid a 'bear' with teeth.

'Innocents' are many people, while 'innocence' is descriptive.

'Wrapped' in paper, the 'rapper' 'rapped' about 'rape.

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Dreamer

Created On: 08/08/2016 09:38:53
     

Hey,

Thank you so much for Reviewing Frozen. It always a pleasure to hear that people are enjoying the story.

And don't worry the bunny if fine, maybe I didn't explain it correctly, but everything came back to life when she felt Sesshomarus warmth lol. Hint Hint



Kanna37

Created On: 10/03/2014 12:51:06
     

It's a Dog's World is a collection of one shots not necessarily related. Some are, like the chibi one shots and the Favorite Author one shots, and others are just stand alone one shots.

Amber


Kimberly Morris

Created On: 01/07/2014 22:32:15
     

Oh, no worries about that. I am glad you are enjoying the story.


Kimberly Morris

Created On: 01/03/2014 21:36:48
     

Thanks for your comment/review, which is:
It's impossible for Sesshomaru and Inuhime to be identical twins. Identical twins come from the same egg, and thus, are both of the same gender. Fraternal twins come from seperate eggs, and can be any combination of genders. Fraternal twins can look alike, but that doesn't make them identical.

I just want to say that I know the differences between identical and fraternal. I am not saying that you were wrong or I am right, because, honestly, I don't know if a girl and a boy could develop into the same egg be identical or vice versa. Now, I could see them being fraternal twins. It does make more sense, huh? haha! Perhaps I should change that. hmm. Yeah, I think I should.
Anyways, thanks....
Feedback from Elizabeth: You're welcome. And I just saw what my review lacked.

I am loving your story, and I hope you don't take the brusque comment/review as anything other than trying to improve a story I am greatly enjoying!


Moonlight Silk

Created On: 06/21/2013 16:54:53
     

I have to agree with you on that, Rin is such a sweet girl, I just cannot imagine her telling Sesshomaru to kill Inuyasha!
Feedback from Elizabeth: It could be that she will defer to someone else, but I don't see her wishing death on the father of her daughter. At some point in the future, she will have to tell said daughter why her father died.


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