Reviews for The Summoner by TamashaToko

Smittee (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Oct 2009

Enjoying this story, I am. ^.^ Say more need I?


FangedBeasty (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Oct 2009

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read the chaos that is sure to ensue.  :)  Great job, :3


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Oct 2009

This has definitely been a very intriguing story about Kagome being a "copy" of Kikyou. It brings lots of things into perspective regarding human nature and their religious beliefs. The way they treat Midoriko and Kagome is wrong considering that they try their best to do what is best for everyone. Now I have to wonder what will happen when Kikyou gets brought back to life? If this Kikyou commits evil deeds then does it negate all the good that she did or will her misdeeds be overlooked? And what is Kikyou's connection to Naraku? Keep up the good work and update soon :P


zenfluence (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Oct 2009

wow, a 5 chapter deal. That seems too rushed for only two more chapters. I like the pace it is now, but it seems like you have to rush through to reach the ending. This story has great potential. Just some critiquing, It's not a flame, just an opinion.

I do really love this story


DreamWeaver (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Sep 2009

ohh... you finally put it back ^^ me ish happy to read this again. *huggles*


Jaded_butterfly (Chapter 2) - Sat 26 Sep 2009

I started reading this when you first posted it and have wondered where it went. im glad you are back and are updating again and i cant wait for more chapter because this story is great so far.


amanda wulke (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Jun 2009
This is an exellent start to what I am sure will be an utterly fabulous story! In short I would simply love it if you could continue writing this story at post haste!

AngryTeapot (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Mar 2009
Love it, Keep writing! :D

Cheebers McGee (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Mar 2009

Right on! This is great; I can't wait to see what happens next. And with that staff of two heads lying around, Jakken still has a chance to make an appearence! :D Lol, do they all go out an conquer the fasion world? No, but on a serious note-- was it Sesshoumaru toying with her dreams or was it another Big Bad?

You've got a great setup working here, and this story will be on my mind for a while yet.

Thank you for sharing,

Kyuthe


media (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

This story is very promising and well written. Though Kagome is out of character, its kinda refreshing after reading so many loud mouthed, sitting the haynou to kingdom come in every other sentence, headstrong, but still a holier than Virgin Mary attitude. She's realisticly human. Well done!


Crystilwyn (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

This story so far has so much to offer.  First there's already developed charcters, setting, and plot.  This story already shows openly how there can be more than one side of a person that we are already introduced to.  In other fanfictions Kagome is usually a character who is very honest, kind, cheerful, happy-go-lucky, etc. type of person, however, in this fanfiction, Kagome is put under duress that would for any human, change their character or show a different side to their persona.  Kagome's parents comparing and treating her as if she were the replacement of her older sister Kikyo, make Kagome feel as if she was only her sister's replacement while she longs to be recognized for her own abilities as an individual.  Unlike Kikyo, Kagome is not the child her parents always wished she would be, and this drives Kagome into a spiral of lies and deceit in order to please her parents.  Tomika keeps the original character of Kagome's kind, cheerful, and determined personality while at the same time recreating Kagome in a way that give a new flavor and a new drive to read fanfictions.  The only thing I had qulams about for the story were the staff that she had stolen with a snake head.  A snake symbolizes lies and deceit but also cunning, wisdom, and good fortune, perhaps, in future chapters the entirety of the symbolism of the snake staff will be explained.  Secondly this story is not like Tomika's other stories, this one happens to be on a completely different level than the other stories she had written, for this one is magnetic enough that were it published you could never be able to put the book down.


Smittee (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009

*throws plushies in your arms* Take these! You deserve them! *is actually trying to brown nose you into writing more soon* Smittee really likes so far.


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