Reviews for Final 2 by TamashaToko

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Sep 2017

Well that first challenge sounded very torturous. Not fair to the humans and children but it was interesting. I am beginning to like this story.

Is the object of this game is that it finally comes down to 2 players and then they go against each other to be only one winner? I am just wondering what Sessho's motive is in picking Kagome to be his ally. He seems like he has a hidden agenda in using Kagome to his advantage.

You are doing a good job with it. Keep it going and I will definitely be looking for future updates.

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Sep 2017

This is intriguing. I am not into reality shows but I do get the concept of them. With the exception of a couple of misspells the chapter is nicely written. I would like to read more to see where this story takes us.

It seems a little confusing. What timeline are they in? It seems like they are in the modern era. It makes me want to ask the question: was the whole shard hunting for the gang just a big elaborate game to be begin with and the powers to be got bored and wanted something else? It also seems that Sessho and Kagome are the only two players that are fighting the mind erase and its effects.

I believe I might enjoy reading this story so therfore let the games begin....LoL


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