wow both stories are awesome inuyasha has a SON!!!! AWW SO CUTE! honestly i wish there was more xD but its cool thank you for two wonderful stories.
Okay I'm going to point out a couple errors in the code situation but that is the only criticism I have for the entire story.
We we don't shock asystole. Defib pads aren't used manually anymore - they are just stickers about 6"x8" we stick on the middle of the chest and on the left side. We just charge the zoll then state 'all clear' and once everyone has their hands up, we shock and immediately resume compressions. No waiting to check for a rhythm. Also, we typically don't put a catheter in until after the code is over because draining the bladder is the least of the worries. KUDOS TO MENTIONING RESPIRATORY THERAPY!! We would intubate him after we gain back a pulse in a human. Epinephrine would be given quite frequently, nice call.
Okay so now. I LOVED this story. Absolutely loved it!!! I think you are a great author and I cannot wait to read more of your work!!!
What a wonderful story thank you
(Chapter 25) - Thu 11 Aug 2016
Beautiful story. I loved it though I would have liked a bit more. U r amazing. Can't wait for ur next story
NO, I need more. Love story even last chapter is short.
Am so happy
Short be good thanks. Hope your little one feels better soon
I love that you have the Band of Seven as the baddies behind the War and assasination attempts. Cannot wait for more.
Awesome chapter. You did well in writing it. So far, everything seems to be falling into place and it seems that every one in Sessho's pack/family will survive into the future because so far we have seen or heard of all three of Sessho's children being there at the moment Inuyasha arrives with his injuries. We have also heard of Kagome tending to Yasha's wounds at the hospital. One of the twin's mentioned earlier, when Kagome first came into the hospital while pregnant with Taro, that they had younger siblings at home with their mother, so obviously, so does Sessho. Rin was mentioned by future Taro indicating that she also survived and found her happiness which I assumed will be with Yasha, if he survives, that is.
This leaves what will be going on with the pack/family during the next 3 to 4 hundred years until that moment in time. Excellent writing and I will be of course looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice exciting chapter. Does Taro have the ability of teleportation now that he went through his first transformation sooner than expected? I agree with the previous reviewer that Taro went back to the well, retrieved Kagome and made it back to the battle in such a short period of time for one so young and inexperienced. Did he gain the ability of teleportation during his premature transformation? The ability of telekinesis and teleporting would make for a powerful being at his young age. I know Sessho is extremely proud of his first born son.
So the band of seven has made their appearance it seems. The plot is thickening. Keep up the good work. Update soon and you did an outstanding job of writing this piece.
(Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Aug 2016
Why would poison effect him at all when he's toxic? It seems like you wanted him to be saved for some reason, but that's a puzzling choice. How was there enough time to go back for Kagome and then make it all the way back in time for the attack?
I knew the assassins were already in the castle and I knew that the future children would have been waiting for when Inuyasha came through the well. That was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter. It is good to know that Rin survived into the future also. Hopefully she did not give up hope on Inuyasha and found someone else to be with because Taro said she found her happiness. Great job.
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